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Requesting feedback on Personal Essay

2022.01.24 19:07 SpeakerFun2437 Requesting feedback on Personal Essay

Hello everyone. A short while back I wrote a personal essay that’s basically a long metaphor for abuse. It’s about 1700 words long and contains nothing graphic besides metaphors. I would lobe it if someone wouldn’t mind checking it out to see if it has emotional weight, see if it feels like it has a good flow, of the narrative voice sounds disjointed. I like it but still I’m not sure if it’s good. Really appreciate anyone who takes their time to do look over it!
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2022.01.24 19:07 subredditsummarybot Your weekly /r/coyotes roundup for the week of January 17 - January 23

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2022.01.24 19:07 -RubyWings- My precious senior Poopy helping me crochet.

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2022.01.24 19:07 businessyndicate Shell’s massive carbon capture facility in Canada emits far more than it captures, study says

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2022.01.24 19:07 Thundergoats I don't want to alarm anyone here...but chivalry2 may be training you for a real battle. 🤣

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2022.01.24 19:07 NewsElfForEnterprise The S&P 500, Nasdaq just staged a turnaround for the ages, marking their largest comebacks since the 2008 financial crisis

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2022.01.24 19:07 ooder4321 I just got the base game do I need to buy the season passes and any tips

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2022.01.24 19:07 samokn Is Ortho assisting hard?

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2022.01.24 19:07 ADMINlSTRAT0R Oreo's Double Stuf has a single F when it's supposed to have double F.

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2022.01.24 19:07 Different-Ask8953 Help? Does everything seem okay before buying?

These are my planned specs, but since I have no clue what I’m doing, I would like to know if it seems okay and will work good for me. My main goal is to play games like Skyrim (with mods), Dead by Daylight, Forest, Sims, etc etc - with a budget being around $1500 Please give me as much input as possible :)
-PC Case: “Corsair 4000D Tempered Glass Mid-Tower ATX” -Monitor: “Sceptre 20” 1600x900 75Hz Ultra Thin” -CPU: “Intel Core i7-10700K” -CPU Cooler: “ARCTIC Freezer 34 eSports - Tower CPU Cooler” -Motherboard: “MSI Z590-A PRO” -Storage: “Western Digital 1TB WD Blue” -Memory: “Corsair Vengeance LPX 16GB (2x8GB)” -Power Supply: “Corsair CX750F RGB, 750 Watt” -Cooling Fan: “Corsair AF120 LED Low Noise Cooling Fan Triple Pack” -Video Card: “ZOTAC GAMING GeForce GTX 1650 OC 4GB” -Operating System: “Microsoft Windows 10 Pro 64 Bit System” Total: $1,565.92
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2022.01.24 19:07 wambamalam 38 / GMT / PC and Consoles

Hi everyone. I posted the other day but lost access to it so reposting hoping I see the replies this time.
I’m 38 and been playing Xbox over the last year. Used to play PC, and as I recently got some redundancy cash, I invested in a new PC and a PS5.
I’m happy to pick up anything really, but the games I’ve been enjoying or keen to play;

Hope that’s enough to get a flavour of what I like. Nothing against younger people, but I’m hoping to play with some people my own sort of age who are in the same position of having kids/career etc.
I can usually get a few hours every couple of evenings and late over the weekends too.
Thanks for reading and thanks for any replies!
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2022.01.24 19:07 navibab Ik_ihe

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2022.01.24 19:07 chillbeats_jose9 Lofi para el DIA DE SAN VALENTIN

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2022.01.24 19:07 CrispyKidd So, I have this Weeb Friend Part 2 (Trigger warning)

Hey folks! It's me Crispy! If you want to hear part 1 click here: https://www.reddit.com/weeabootales/comments/rpeqk0/so_i_have_this_weeb_friend/

Now I got some more stories about this guy, I remember running into him in the hallways and he asked me "What class are you going to?" I told him french class (The hard class) And then he said "Japanese is Better" (Boom! He said it!) And he left for his class.
Days have passed and nothing new happen till now.
In the last period of my class when I was just walking around the class and talking to people I ended up listening to my friend and my teacher talking to each other, And he was talking about Mark and I couldn't hear them that much. when Mark came to class just to say hi the teacher called him over to chat. and they were whispering so I couldn't hear.
After the bell rang and I said my goodbyes and then go to my club, My friend who was talking to the teacher caught up to me and I asked him what happened with Mark and He told me something that shook me to the very core of my heart.
The convocation starts off like this:
Me: Hey Bro what happened with mark?
Friend: What do you mean?
Me: Why was the teacher talking to him?
Friend: Oh! Well, I was walking to my class and I spotted Mark holding hands with the new girl in our class (SHE IS A FRESHMEN!!) And they were dating in school, And I got worried.
Me: That's just..Gross.

And we made it to the club and I was just thinking of that the whole day and I couldn't believe that my "Friend" was dating a 14-year-old FRESHMEN!
I was iffy about our friendship and I was NOT expecting this!

So, that's the end of the story, and sorry if it triggers you a little bit.
Stay Crispy everyone!
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2022.01.24 19:07 mohammednabarawy تقرير - أجهزة iPad Pro الجديدة قادمة في عام 2022 بمعالج M2

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2022.01.24 19:07 kyanitemica My (40F) new partner (45M) has disclosed his depression and also confusion as to whether we should be together - he isn’t sure if it’s his depression clouding his feelings.

I’ve been seeing a wonderful man for the past three months. We live in different cities, so see each other most weekends. Over the past three weeks his behaviour has changed - a little withdrawn, communication is different, physical touch is non existent unless we are intimate, a rudeness to his humour, amongst other things. This, paired with his reluctance to open up, had me questioning where I stood with him. As I have been very open about where he stands with me ( ie, I like spending time with you, enjoying to get to know you, looking forward to seeing you, etc - none of which is now being reciprocated), I questioned his behaviour during a phone conversation. He divulged that he has depression, which he has been dealing with for many years (I’m thankful he has shared), and that he can see that his changes in behaviour are happening and that I am noticing and reacting to them. He also stated that he is unsure if his depression is making him feel like we aren’t suited, or whether we really aren’t suited, depression aside. I can relate to his situation in a way as I deal with anxiety, however I am finding it difficult to understand why he can’t tell if we are/aren’t compatible by now. If he didn’t have depression, and simply told me he was unsure about us, I would have walked away, as doubt is there for him already with regards to the relationship. However now I find myself sitting back waiting for an answer from him, and that doesn’t feel right for me. I don’t want to walk away prematurely, but I’m now confused myself (however that could also be my hurt ego). Does anyone have a similar situation to share with me? This is my first post - am I doing it right???!
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2022.01.24 19:07 Blockyboi_xml expunged looks like bambi due to bambis spritesheet being the first thing it saw, so what if a different character's spritesheet was seen?

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2022.01.24 19:07 geo_exe1987 A wave seen from below

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2022.01.24 19:07 Kunphen The Horned Helmets Falsely Attributed to Vikings Are Actually Nearly 3,000 Years Old | Smart News

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2022.01.24 19:07 niemieszany Girls do not use toilet !

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2022.01.24 19:07 businessyndicate GPU Prices Plummet Along With Crypto

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